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Sales Email Subject Lines

Sales emails compete with every other promotion in the inbox. The lines that win state the offer or the outcome plainly, add a real deadline when one exists, and avoid the phrases that spam filters and readers have learned to skip.

15 sales subject lines

  1. Your brand

    {first_name}, your 20% off expires Sunday

    41 chars · Strong

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  2. Your brand

    The upgrade our customers ask about most

    40 chars · Good

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  3. Your brand

    Last day to save on annual plans

    32 chars · Strong

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  4. Your brand

    You left this in the shop window

    32 chars · Strong

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  5. Your brand

    New: the feature you asked for is live

    38 chars · Strong

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  6. Your brand

    Your quote is ready, {first_name}

    33 chars · Strong

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  7. Your brand

    How Acme cut reporting time in half

    35 chars · Good

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  8. Your brand

    Before prices change on the 1st

    31 chars · Strong

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  9. Your brand

    Two ways to get more from your plan

    35 chars · Strong

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  10. Your brand

    A better price for teams of 5+

    30 chars · Strong

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  11. Your brand

    Your trial ends in 3 days

    25 chars · Strong

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  12. Your brand

    Still comparing options? Here's a checklist

    43 chars · Good

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  13. Your brand

    Early access for existing customers

    35 chars · Good

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  14. Your brand

    Worth a look: our spring collection

    35 chars · Good

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  15. Your brand

    Only 40 seats left for the workshop

    35 chars · Strong

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Why these work

Lead with the offer or the outcome

People scan. “Your 20% off expires Sunday” tells them everything in six words.

Use real deadlines only

An honest “Last day” works. A fake one every week trains your list to ignore urgency.

Borrow proof

A customer result (“How Acme cut reporting time in half”) sells harder than an adjective.

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Frequently asked questions

What is a good subject line for a sales email?

One that names the offer or the benefit, is specific (a number, a date, a product), and sounds credible. Keep it under about 50 characters and avoid pressure phrases like “act now” or “guaranteed”.

Should sales subject lines include the discount?

Usually yes. A concrete figure like “20% off” or “free shipping” is one of the clearest reasons to open. If you run discounts constantly, test lines that lead with the product or a story instead.

Do words like “free” send emails to spam?

A single word rarely decides it on its own; modern filters weigh sender reputation, authentication and engagement far more. But stacked hype (“FREE!!! Act now”) still looks like spam to people, which lowers engagement.